Dear Nathaniel, I've listened to your revised Overture three times, and liked it better each time. Following the score supplements my hearing. If it isn't too much trouble, I would be happy for you to e-mail me the mp3 sound files and the pdf scores of other compositions as you proceed. You might consider and advise me, whether detailed comments on specific passages would be distracting or helpful. If you asked not to be disturbed, I would be sympathetic and my feelings would not be hurt. As you can infer, I can't identify the boundaries of my enthusiasm for what you ar doing. Love, Jochen