Dear Nathaniel,

Just now I listened again twice to each, the 1st and the 2nd Movement, and derived so much pleasure from listening that I could not be critical.  I hope you will continue composing. In my own writing, I commonly compose several variations of the same poem or of the same essay. Then, as time passes, I prefer first one and then the other. I am as reluctant to criticise what is written, be it by myself or by others, as I am reluctant to criticise personalities. I consider it my function not to criticise, but to understand.  But if you have questions, please ask, and please continue to send me your compositions as you progress.

Love, Jochen